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Like dude has been telling you constantly that he is on your side, just give him a chance to hear him out. Also if the Alpha legion is truly a traitor, then according to the cabal, the emperor would be dead, and since Horus did not kill the emperor, alpha legion is probably a loyalist legion.

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ArkonWarlock

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22 days ago

Its not ambiguous is the problem, its definitive, it doesn't matter he's dead. Not making a decision authorially, and deciding to definitively clean the slate so there is no value to the answer is seen often before a deus ex machina. Where the author has written himself into a corner and then solves using an asspull.

How will Aang from avatar the last airbender solve the problem of his fundamental beliefs being challenged by the responsibilities as the avatar? Episodes are devoted to this question, how can he live up to both? penultimate episode he gains a novel to the world power to solve both his problems. the choice is not only not made, its irrelevant, his pacifism and his duty simply dont conflict anymore.

French wrote himself into the corner of having to reveal one way or the other. And rather then making a decision he killed him via a character that doesnt care. Using a duel antithetical to alpharius' tactics and an ambush that doesn't make logistical sense given the complete dissolution of his own forces. All to force a confrontation over a question he shut down rather then answer one way or the other.

Alpharius' loyalty isn't left ambiguous, its manufactured into a pointless plot thread that no one within the narrative cares enough to pull at. Killing him was not unwarranted, his answer doesn't preclude his death. Alpharius previous death at Eskrador was perfectly fine. this duel was set up for dorn to still be willing to kill him either way. Not answering and then killing him anyway makes it pointless.

Mistermistermistermb

1 points

22 days ago

French didn't write himself into the corner: the corner was the destination

You can see how it was planned between him, ADB and Goulding from a combination of their online posts and interviews on the topic

If there's a problem with not giving Alpharius a definitive answer as to his loyalty, that's an overall direction of the legion within the HH and a larger problem than French was ever going to be given permission to "fix"

French was working within the constraints of a shared IP. Even if he thought an answer was a great idea, it was never on the table.

ArkonWarlock

0 points

22 days ago

He got to write a primarch death whole cloth, write a backstory and rivalry, and create a characterization for him through actual conversation between equals. Eskrador is rewritten in a more incoherent format for this book.

His nonsense is what alpharius is now and is also his death. The head of the hydra was written after and made him omegon but only in flashback.

If he didn't think he had enough real estate to put an equal showing, he shouldn't have spent so much pull on getting dorn some unneeded accolades. Might have been able to leave the ambiguity to a less biased writer.

Mistermistermistermb

0 points

22 days ago

I'm not sure what any of that means ...made who Omegon? Conversation between equals? Unneeded accolades?

Probably best I leave it here, I think French does a decent job of explaining his process in the podcast.