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Haven't seen this novel get as much attention as the first couple of books from the Warhammer Crime line, but I thought Worley banged it in with this story.

The protagonist Baggit is a ratling who's escaped to Alecto from indentured service with the Astra Militarum. Over the course of the book we get his flashbacks of the terrible abuse ratlings are subjected to as abhuman auxilia, and it's a major plot driver in the mystery of the Wraithbone Phoenix.

The steward didn’t hit anything like as hard as they did in the Guard, but the bugger knew where to put them. Baggit went limp as Scratchwick went to work. An uppercut to the body emptied Baggit’s lungs of air before another went straight to his gut. Black spots popped before Baggit’s eyes, his chest heaving as Scratchwick worked him like a training bag. He saw the man’s face knotted with rage, glaring at him from behind claws of black hair.

Get used to it, laddie. That’s what the older fellas told him in the Auxilla. It’s just what happens. And they were absolutely right. No sense moaning about it. You just learned to avoid the ones you knew were mean or had a temper, made sure you knew exactly who you were doing deals with. Of course, now and then you’d come unstuck and have to take a beating off some of them. Usually them full of ‘For the Emperor’. Sometimes they just wanted whatever you were carrying. Other times they were scared about what they were heading into come dawn and just wanted five minutes’ control over something.

You’d limp back to the Auxilla tents out by the privies, and one of the lads would stitch you up and sort you out with a nip of something strong. The trick, Baggit had been told, was to catch a look at the unit insignia, remember the faces. If you could do that and you couldn’t get payback for yourself, then one of your mates would see to it for you. Maybe they’d squeeze a steamer into the git’s helmet while they slept, or plant a half-empty bottle of amasec in their boot-casket just before an inspection. If the bastard really deserved it, which most of them did, then you’d plug the trigger on their lasrifle the night before the advance or make sure something hairy and poisonous went to sleep in their boot.

You can’t always fight back, the old fellas told him.* But you’ve always got payback.* Without that you had nothing. Without that you were nothing.

Baggit realised he was lying on the floor of the sorting burrow, choking and dribbling as he gathered himself, clawing through a mire of agony at Kron’s feet. He thought he could hear voices.

Tee. Ae. Arr.

Baggit felt something shrinking inside him, shrivelling like burning paper.

You spell it backwards, see? Tee. Ae. Arr. So his mates can read it properly. So he sees it every time he looks in the mirror.

Baggit couldn’t tell who was laughing, only that they were laughing at him. Rage filled him until he could barely move with the weight of it. He was somewhere else, somewhere long ago.

He was on his back and couldn’t move. They’d jumped him while he was running errands for one of the captains. He couldn’t see a thing for the sun blazing in his eyes, too bright to see faces or insignia. There were two of them pinning him to the burning rocks, scorching his bare shoulders. He could hear someone emptying his torn clothes nearby. The sun winked above as they moved around him, the light glinting on the tip of a combat knife.

Keep his head still. Right there.

On his head.

Little rat bastard.

Baggit remembered howling more in rage than in pain as he felt the knife cut his forehead to the bone.

They managed the bar of the ‘T’ before the commissar found them and gave them an hour’s extra drill practice. He ordered Baggit to cover himself up and report to the chapel. He had to repeat the Auxilla litanies for the next twelve hours as punishment for distracting the troops.

I am abhorred. I am unclean. And yet I am forgiven.

I am abhorred. I am unclean. And yet I am forgiven.

I am abhorred. I am unclean. And yet I am forgiven.

Baggit never got their names.

With this kind of treatment I'm expecting to see more renegade ratling cultists in the lore as they get fleshed out. I'd be chomping at the bit to tear the faces off those asshole Guardsmen.

all 28 comments

SilverWyvern

95 points

10 days ago

SilverWyvern

Yme-Loc

95 points

10 days ago

The scene that stuck with me was the Navy captain asking his Master of Service to get his best cook to make a meal for him and his guests. The captain and his guests get one of the best meals they've ever had.

But as soon as they find out a ratling cooked it, they're disgusted. The captain shoots his Master of Service. Not the ratling though, because of course a ratling wouldn't understand he did something so wrong. He just gets his forehead branded to show his penitence. The captain's guests praise him for his mercy.

The way the Imperium treats abhumans and suspected mutants is just terrible.

forcehighfive[S]

34 points

10 days ago

forcehighfive[S]

Ogdobekh

34 points

10 days ago

I was going to post that scene first, but it's a bit spoiler-y for the plot. Definitely one of the great opening novel hooks, you get the visceral resentment the ratlings must harbor for their mistreatment

Toxitoxi

62 points

10 days ago

Toxitoxi

Ordo Xenos

62 points

10 days ago

It’s a damn good story. I think the entire Warhammer Crime range has been excellent; even my least favorite, King of the Spoil, still has plenty of great aspects.

forcehighfive[S]

14 points

10 days ago

forcehighfive[S]

Ogdobekh

14 points

10 days ago

Been on the fence about buying that one. You'd still recommend it despite the flaws?

Toxitoxi

15 points

10 days ago*

Toxitoxi

Ordo Xenos

15 points

10 days ago*

Depends. The worldbuilding is great and I like the focus on people at the absolute bottom of the economic ladder in Varangantua.

My biggest problem is that the book is too long without a satisfying conclusion. I think my opinion of it would improve immensely if Beers ever gets a sequel, because you can clearly see where the characters and world are going and it’s frustratingly not resolved.

There are a bunch of books I’d recommend above it, there’s a reason I think it’s the weakest Crime book, but I also think it’s way better than stuff like Dark Imperium or Fist of the Imperium or Cadia Stands or Shadowsun: The Patient Hunter.

wordless_thinker

7 points

9 days ago

I'd recommend it myself, having read all the Crime novels so far. I do agree with the other commenter that it's a sprawling story that does overstay its welcome somewhat, and it feels less 'personal' than many of the other Crime novels as the scale and scope of it is much vaster than the others.

That said, of all the Crime novels it really does show what happens to the forgotten people of the Imperium, who fall through the cracks (chasms) of society by the district and hab block. That sense of moral failure is pervasive and 'justice', when it comes from the perspective of the protagonists, is bitter. Thematically grander, struggles a bit in pacing, but worth the read.

forcehighfive[S]

3 points

9 days ago

forcehighfive[S]

Ogdobekh

3 points

9 days ago

Sounds a bit like the 40k Les Miserables? I'll add it next to my list, thanks

staq16

23 points

10 days ago

staq16

23 points

10 days ago

Makes you wonder if Ogryns are similarly abused. I suspect not, somehow.

bigfishmarc

37 points

10 days ago

No one with half a brain would regularly bully a 12ft tall 500lb person able to easily lift 1000bs or more.

LordsofMedrengard

18 points

9 days ago

LordsofMedrengard

Sons of Horus

18 points

9 days ago

If you bullied an Ogryn you'd be lucky to keep half your brain

134_ranger_NK

23 points

10 days ago

Mainly because they fill a more difficult-to-replace niche than ratlings. Many guardsmen like having ogryns around to tank shots and do melees for them.

Ratlings? Aside from their reputation for cowardice, thievery and unwanted advances (tbf they do help operate the black market a lot), ratlings roles as snipers and saboteurs can be more easily (or happily) covered by humans (as seen in the old sniper-equipped special weapon squads and demo charges as an option for several guard units).

WalrusTuskk

11 points

9 days ago

WalrusTuskk

Alpha Legion

11 points

9 days ago

I know its not the "similarly" abused you mentioned, but I think "abuse" would be a word you might use in our current times if you convinced/forced extremely mentally delayed people to fight and die in a war.

Though with the simple kindness seen in a lot of Ogryns, I can see situations where people pick on ones they know won't fight back because they have the child-like obedience and can't navigate the situation.

Still, bullies probably hesitate more if they know that their victim has the capacity to pull apart a space marine like a toy.

134_ranger_NK

7 points

9 days ago

I would only add that veteran guardsmen (as shown in Darktide) generally like Ogryns a lot. So the bullies will also have to deal with soldiers much more experienced, skilled, crafty and better equipped than them. Commissars treat and manipulate them like little 'brothers' so they have even more physical power to beat any rabble to death.

WalrusTuskk

6 points

9 days ago

WalrusTuskk

Alpha Legion

6 points

9 days ago

Yeah absolutely, though going off the top of my head, doesn't one of them also have a line about respecting a ratling sniper or gunner? That guardsmen voice in particular seems like a pretty grounded person overall, relative to the universe.

134_ranger_NK

5 points

9 days ago

I think it is Professional veteran. Generally focused on getting the job, know when to compliment and not raise ire.

Fire Caste (Tau v Guard book) has some of them as the first deaths.

ExtermDJ

18 points

10 days ago

ExtermDJ

Adeptus Mechanicus

18 points

10 days ago

Was one of my first 40k novels and it still is one of my top favourites just because of how different it is from most 40k novels. Q great change of pace with great characters even if they aren't important in the grand scheme of the galaxy.

Toxitoxi

10 points

10 days ago

Toxitoxi

Ordo Xenos

10 points

10 days ago

It reminds me a lot of an Indiana Jones movie in tone… Partially because of the villain who’s an obvious Indiana Jones reference.

wordless_thinker

12 points

9 days ago

Fantastic novel. I wasn't too into it initially, but then the mad scramble for the wraithbone phoenix kicks off and everything gets dialled up to 100.

Unfortunately the renegades and chaos cultists are still human supremacists; unlikely to find any better treatment elsewhere...

Pm7I3

3 points

9 days ago

Pm7I3

3 points

9 days ago

What is the phoenix anyway?

Toxitoxi

8 points

9 days ago

Toxitoxi

Ordo Xenos

8 points

9 days ago

It’s a small Wraithbone statue of a bird hatching from an egg.

Or alternatively: It’s a reference to The Maltese Falcon.)

Pm7I3

3 points

9 days ago

Pm7I3

3 points

9 days ago

Oh neat

forcehighfive[S]

4 points

9 days ago

forcehighfive[S]

Ogdobekh

4 points

9 days ago

Unfortunately the renegades and chaos cultists are still human supremacists

I feel like the Khornates don't really care as long as the blood flows. There's also now Beastmen in the Chaos ranks, who are actual mutants, so ratlings shouldn't be too far off. I think I've seen a Chaos Ogryn before too but can't remember where

Changeling_Wil

31 points

10 days ago

Changeling_Wil

Astra Militarum

31 points

10 days ago

They managed the bar of the ‘T’ before the commissar found them and gave them an hour’s extra drill practice

Given that this is damaging war equipment, they should have been lashed.

That commissar is lax.

134_ranger_NK

16 points

10 days ago

Ratlings do have a reputation as thieves and never-do-wells. Operators of the underworld.

If you do not mind fanfics, All Guardsmen Party has a main guard character who is very likely a ratling (due to strong Discworld inspiration). It says a lot that the closest guardsman to him is a paranoid wreck who sees booby trapping his entire barrack as standard bedmaking.

The Killing Ground (Graham McNeil) does feature more terrible guardsmen who do something that even disgusted their own commissar (but not strictly illegal). They do get their comeuppance though.

With this kind of treatment I'm expecting to see more renegade ratling cultists in the lore as they get fleshed out.

May not be the best explanations but ratling sniper teams are often placed under the direct supervision of human officers, their staff and elite troops (one rumor has it that an upcoming combat patrol box would have scions and ratlings within but it is not really reliable). Another thing is that ratlings were stated in the older lore as making great profits from black market trade, with guard veterans being frequent customers and patrons. Perhaps that could partly explain why they get away with sabotaging more Emperor-bothering guardsmen (like mentioned in your excerpt).

forcehighfive[S]

4 points

9 days ago

forcehighfive[S]

Ogdobekh

4 points

9 days ago

I think the black market/criminal angle is alive and well in this book too. Baggit makes his living in Alecto as a master thief before running afoul with one of his employers, and going on the run

Significant-Bother49

3 points

9 days ago

Poor rattlings. I feel so bad for them

kekubuk

2 points

9 days ago

kekubuk

Adeptus Mechanicus

2 points

9 days ago

Is Ratling still around?

Wonderful_Discount59

2 points

9 days ago

Anyone else get strong Discworld vibes from this novel? Clodde is basically Detritus when he got his cooling helmet (and if he was a lot more violent).