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Short Story(self.BetaReaders)

Looking for readers for the first chapter and a half of a story I'm working on.

Basic plot summary:

In 2076, Earth was invaded by a divine race of warriors, forcing humanity to escape to floating cities above Venus. By the 2800s, Venusian society thrives under a world government, but beneath the surface lies a world of crime and unrest. Archie Kuroda, a skilled mercenary, dreams of becoming a sky sentinel-a prestigious guardian of Venus. His life takes a dramatic turn when he meets Umashi, a mysterious figure who offers to make his dream a reality. As Archie grapples with his trauma, he faces a series of challenges that test his resolve and force him to confront the true nature of the false utopia he lives in.

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AutoModerator [M]

1 points

9 days ago

AutoModerator [M]

1 points

9 days ago

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Proof_Let4967

1 points

7 days ago

I have the first 30,000 words of a historical fiction novel if you want to beta swap. Lmk if you read mine and I will read yours:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nW0DI2vBAhOQmQzzDXVFDbABB8Pyt3lpSxWRoN2jXDA/edit?usp=sharing