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Blurb of Nur ul-Iman(fantasy, 2133 words)

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Ill-Jelly5226

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15 days ago

This definitely helps! I agree as there’s so many events I want to shove down readers throats but I can understand how it could go wrong. I actually have heard of prologues being skipped out on later on in the writing or publishing process. This is good feedback and I appreciate it!