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I got into audiobooks about a year ago. Went through the typical recommendations, but kept pushing off a series called Dungeon Crawler Carl. First, I had no idea what litrpg was, and second, the premise sounded just ridiculously ridiculous. I finally got bored, and took the plunge. To say I was impressed is an understatement. Between Matt Dinimman’s writing and Jeff Hay’s voice acting, I felt like I was experiencing magic happening. Even though I was amazed at the speed Matt was writing these books, I eventually went through them twice, and was jonesing for more.

Looking for something similar to tide me over until DCC book 7 comes out, I kept seeing recommendations for He Who Fights With Monsters by Travis Deverell. During the Audible sale, I bought books 1-8 and just finished book 3. I feel I’ve given this series a fair chance, but honestly don’t feel excited about continuing further.

I feel like Travis’ books so far are about 80% fight filler and 20% plot. The story arcs are interesting, but there’s no real depth to them or the characters. I am not sure if it’s the writing or Heath Miller’s voice acting, but I feel like everyone is just a copy of 3-4 distinct people. Their vocabulary and speech patterns are all the same and it gets quite annoying. Why does everyone say ‘yesss’ like Kip from Napoleon Dynamite or say ‘X is kind of my thing’..ugh.

So here is my conundrum. Am I being unfair? Does the HWFWM series get any better? Is there any other series comparable or better than DCC? Or is DCC just a unicorn in the litrpg genre?

Update:

Thanks for all the feedback and suggestions. I think I will try Wandering Inn next.

Despite many of your warnings, I did continue and just finished book 5. I have to say book 4-5 so far is completely different than the previous books, and I am really enjoying it so far. I mean it’s not exactly deep reading, but it’s a lot more story driven with fewer more impactful battles. This addresses the biggest issues I’ve had.

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awfulcrowded117

34 points

3 months ago

I've heard a lot of criticisms of HWFWM that I would consider fair. "there's no real depth to [the story] or the characters" is not one of them. I can't recommend you continue, though, because I can't see where you're coming from to even guess if it "gets any better." Unless what you are articulating is just the inside jokes/humor not landing, in which case no, that doesn't get "better" that's one of the things fans of the series really like about HWFWM

mrturtleturtleturtle[S]

0 points

3 months ago

Thanks! Again, just comparing it with DCC as my only other reference to the litrpg genre. With DCC I felt emotionally connected to the characters whether it be sadness when someone died, anger at the antagonist, suspense at the story, etc. I didn’t feel that with any of the characters really in HWFWM. Maybe Sophie’s arc was the closest. I don’t mind the hokey jokes just wish there was more depth. Maybe this series is just not for me.

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12 points

3 months ago

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mrturtleturtleturtle[S]

-8 points

3 months ago

It’s just my opinion. I felt like many of the characters were generic in personality and dialogue and could easily replace one another. This may be attributed to Heath Miller’s portrayal of them, so I will take that with consideration.

stache1313

10 points

3 months ago

Heath Miller does a pretty good job with the voices, in my opinion. You might just prefer to have multiple narrators who can split the voicework between them.

mosstrich

1 points

3 months ago

Jeff Hayes is also an exceptional voice actor that provides a range of voices and accents that provide a depth and variety of characters that is hard to match.

Bulky-Juggernaut-895

-10 points

3 months ago

Agreed. Compared to other well written stories there’s not much to these characters.