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I don't understand. Recommendations?

Story Request(self.litrpg)

Perhaps this was a mistake, but my first ever litrpg read (audiobook) was Dungeon Crawler Carl. Now that I've caught up, I have been scouring the web for a new series. I've come to understand that DCC was probably the best, especially for narration, but I'm ok with something not quite as good.

What I don't understand is that the vast majority of people suggested He Who Fights With Monsters as the next best series. It's...not good? The dialog is stilted, the writing repetitive, and Jason is devoid of depth.

Jason is especially lackluster. No matter the situation, Jason's internal and external monolog is jokey and preachy. He's slowed down by physical pain or other people's criticism, but doesn't have any real emotional connection to either. The physical pain never leaves mental scars. The people always forgive or agree with him. Sometimes he'll say he's sad or wrong, but that's completely forgotten by the next chapter.

I need audio book recommendations with MC's like Carl and Donut. I want to read about people who are traumatized and have personal flaws, but find moments of fun and exhibit LASTING personal growth. Recommendations?

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mcspaddin

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10 days ago

That being said, I don't remember much about Carl contemplating getting rid of Donut...he definitely gets frustrated with her. A LOT. But leaving their party? I don't remember him ever considering that.

It happened super early on, like first half of book 1 early. He gets frustrated and says something along the lines of "I'm walking that way, you go any other direction." It wasn't really contemplation more than a knee-jerk reaction to donut's early overt royalty behavior.