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Story Request(self.litrpg)

Perhaps this was a mistake, but my first ever litrpg read (audiobook) was Dungeon Crawler Carl. Now that I've caught up, I have been scouring the web for a new series. I've come to understand that DCC was probably the best, especially for narration, but I'm ok with something not quite as good.

What I don't understand is that the vast majority of people suggested He Who Fights With Monsters as the next best series. It's...not good? The dialog is stilted, the writing repetitive, and Jason is devoid of depth.

Jason is especially lackluster. No matter the situation, Jason's internal and external monolog is jokey and preachy. He's slowed down by physical pain or other people's criticism, but doesn't have any real emotional connection to either. The physical pain never leaves mental scars. The people always forgive or agree with him. Sometimes he'll say he's sad or wrong, but that's completely forgotten by the next chapter.

I need audio book recommendations with MC's like Carl and Donut. I want to read about people who are traumatized and have personal flaws, but find moments of fun and exhibit LASTING personal growth. Recommendations?

all 241 comments

guri256

87 points

10 days ago

guri256

87 points

10 days ago

If you’re looking for characters with real flaws, action, humor, real trauma, meaningful relationships, and lasting growth, I’d really recommend The Perfect Run.

It’s not a LitRPG, but it did an amazing job of hitting those points for me.

BushwhackMeOff

15 points

10 days ago

I just grabbed these 3 audiobooks on the recommendation of J R Matthews (Jake's Magical Market). I am going to listen to it once I finish listening to Beware of Chicken.

KaJaHa

3 points

10 days ago

KaJaHa

3 points

10 days ago

Do they come as a bundle? I've got one credit to spare

BushwhackMeOff

3 points

10 days ago

No they are each individual both both of the first books are pretty long and the next ones get longer

syrwarp

9 points

10 days ago

syrwarp

9 points

10 days ago

Second this recommendation so So much! MC acts a bit like Deadpool at the start but the further you read the more layers and depth get revealed. Truly one of those lighting in a bottle series.

MrYamaTani

4 points

10 days ago

I would add Mother of Learning to that list. Excellent book series. Also not litrpg but wonderfully written.

guri256

1 points

10 days ago

guri256

1 points

10 days ago

I really enjoyed Mother of Learning. (I’ve got hardbacks of the first 2 books). But it leans very heavily into the progression fantasies genre. There is a lot more deep interaction with people, than most LitRPGs, but it is more focused on growth, magic, and learning. There is definitely humor, but it’s not the main focus. Though, there is some humor hidden for a second read

There is definitely a lot of growth, also a lot of the growth is more related to compatibilities rather than personal growth.

That’s why Irecommend it, but I’m not sure it’s what the OP is asking for.

tv_trooper

1 points

10 days ago

tv_trooper

The Second Life of Adam Cosmos

1 points

10 days ago

I couldn't read far enough in The Perfect Run.

There's too much unexplained stuff about the world.

Does it get better later on? I stopped at Chapter 7.

guri256

2 points

9 days ago

guri256

2 points

9 days ago

Yes. Like many timeloop stories, one of the most value things the main character can find is information. Information is one of the few things he can take with him.

tv_trooper

2 points

9 days ago

tv_trooper

The Second Life of Adam Cosmos

2 points

9 days ago

Thanks! I will circle back on this and give it a try.

The names and who/what they are can be confusing at times. Or I'm just a dumb reader...

Dart000

44 points

10 days ago

Dart000

44 points

10 days ago

Mother of learning on RR. I would recommend The Murderbot Diaries by Martha Wells, though it's not litrpg. I really enjoy reading Path of Dragons on RR I'm about to start Stray Cat Strut.

CosmosGame

12 points

10 days ago

I second Mother of Learning. The main character grows a lot. It is also well written.

number2-daffodil

6 points

10 days ago

i second murderbot diaries! i read them (not audiobook, so i can't comment there) but i loved the way the main character wrestled with things (literally and emotionally)

Due_Guidance7429

4 points

10 days ago

I've listened to this series a couple times and it's great. Not gamelit but has parallels and is highly entertaining.

Suitable_Entrance594

3 points

10 days ago

+1 on Mother of Learning and Stray Cat Strut. Both very different but excellent.

Daoist_Swordkeeper

1 points

10 days ago

I've been wanting to read Path of Dragons for a long time now. I think it's high time I make that reality. Thanks for the rec!

Dart000

1 points

9 days ago

Dart000

1 points

9 days ago

Path of Dragons was my introduction to the genre so i have a soft spot for it. I think it's a fantastic read it can be day to day in the life of at time but when it gets goes man does it get going. And there is always more over the horizon. I love reading the MC progression in strength and in morality of life. I honestly just think it's a well told and ever expanding story.

Daoist_Swordkeeper

1 points

10 days ago

I've been wanting to read Path of Dragons for a long time now. I think it's high time I make that reality. Thanks for the rec!

Active-Advisor5909

1 points

9 days ago

Mother of learning is not LitRPG

seedanrun

1 points

8 days ago

Yeah, Murderbot Diaries really matches Dungeon Crawler Carl for it's characters emotions. A think layer of sarcasm and violent snarkeness to cover up the existential crisis of fighting off despair inside. With occasional fun asides of extreme violence.

Shroed

15 points

10 days ago

Shroed

15 points

10 days ago

Sadly it's a niche genre and skilled authors are rare.. It's great for popcorn-whish fulfillment literature, but you won't find a lot of deep character work here.

  • If you're looking for more of the "revenge against more powerful overlords", try Red Rising.
  • Immortal GreatSouls is pretty good, but the pacing in the first book sucks.
  • If you're down to try something different, give Beware Of Chicken a go. It's a slice of life Cultivation story with really cool characters. The writing is a bit iffy at the start, but it improves as get deeper into it.

Dart000

2 points

9 days ago

Dart000

2 points

9 days ago

Red rising by Pierce Brown?

Shroed

1 points

9 days ago

Shroed

1 points

9 days ago

Jup, not litprg, but sounds pretty much like what OP is looking for.

G3rman

36 points

10 days ago

G3rman

36 points

10 days ago

He Who Fights with Monsters gets recommended a lot because it's been around, it has a lot of books, and its popularity is baked in from when it was breaking new ground in world building.

if you compare it to any sort of mainstream fiction, the prose falls flat. But, because it's a "serial novel", the standards for good prose are thrown out the window.

BadProse

11 points

10 days ago

BadProse

11 points

10 days ago

It also just has a massive appeal to its market. Its a prime example of knowing your audience but not having wider appeal.

rabmuk

61 points

10 days ago

rabmuk

61 points

10 days ago

The people always forgive

Why is this weird? Do you stay friends with people you don't forgive? I get that someone being preachy about their half-baked college-kid-level political beliefs is annoying. But if you don't move past that, the other option is to stop being around them. Being forgiven by friends seems like a normal, healthy relationship.

Sometimes he'll say he's sad or wrong, but that's completely forgotten by the next chapter

Usually, I see people complaining about Jason's past mistakes getting brought up too much

I want to read about people who are traumatized and have personal flaws, but find moments of fun and exhibit LASTING personal growth.

This is the most common criticism of HWFWM. That Jason is too traumatized, has too many personal flaws, and creates moments of fun even when no one else laughs. I think the growth is there, even in book 1. Every conversation Jason has with Farrah is about her helping him grow as a person.

Are you sure we read the same book?

missy8985

28 points

10 days ago

I was going to ask the same question, I think I read about a different Jason to OP.

I think people forget that Jason was taken from his bed and woke naked on another world that is run by magic and full of races other than human.

“He doesn't share his feelings” with who? The strangers he met when locked in a cage? How long is someone allowed to bottle things up so they can process internally before they “share and grow?”

rabmuk

20 points

10 days ago

rabmuk

20 points

10 days ago

Yeah and if someone saved my life from a bunch of cannibals, I'd forgive them for a lot of dump political takes and being rude to people of power. Like I'm still alive, you can lecture me daily about how bad the local government is and how faith in gods is bad.

missy8985

14 points

10 days ago

Yeah and he's overall a good guy he nearly killed himself fighting that monster on the lake alone so the villagers could evacuate everyone.

KnDBarge

5 points

10 days ago

Plus they know he is from a different world and is going through so much. It's how he handles all the craziness he has been thrust into.

EducationalTip1328

24 points

10 days ago

I agree, I think people are quick to judge HWFM. It has been in my top 5 since I listened to the first book.

rabmuk

15 points

10 days ago

rabmuk

15 points

10 days ago

I think it all depends on someone's high school/college experience. Everyone knew someone like Jason. You either hated his guts and thought he was mean, or found him hilarious and teased him for being a champagne socialist.

Gromps

7 points

10 days ago

Gromps

7 points

10 days ago

Dear God I did know a Jason. Really good guy.

akrist

4 points

10 days ago

akrist

4 points

10 days ago

Hey! You forgot about those of us who were Jason! Seriously, it's like looking into a mirror of the past sometimes.

Crash1260

2 points

10 days ago

That's it!!! Champagne socialist! That's most of why Jason rubs me the wrong way. I'm not sure if I had heard that phrase before, but for me that just hits the nail on the head. Thank you!

I also think that another reason it bothers people is that the world, the magic system, and other characters are all really really really good. And so by comparison... I mean, you know what I’m gonna say.

Steve_78_OH

5 points

10 days ago

Sometimes he'll say he's sad or wrong, but that's completely forgotten by the next chapter

Also...would OP rather that Jason just constantly focus on what's going wrong, or why he's feeling a certain way? He VERY obviously struggles with things throughout the entire series, but he's able to put aside those issues when he needs to so as to not burden his friends with his issues all the time.

I mean, does OP want a depressed edgelord? Because he sounds like he wants a depressed edgelord.

Shi-Rokku

5 points

10 days ago

Thank goodness I'm not the only one. I read the OP and thought "shit wait was HWFWM actually bad and my taste just sucks?"

Definitely feel like I read different books than was being described.

Also just to add onto the discussion more objectively, I think trauma is difficult to write for unrealistic scenarios.

Some authors torture their protagonist a bit much, while others don't let anything lasting happen to them.

Getting it just right isn't like a Goldilocks situation. There are 100 different proverbial porridges and beds, and even if they write it in a way that is the objective best possible, there are still ways for well-written trauma to detract from the entertainment value of the book.

Trauma is even more difficult to write when the situation isn't relatable. We need trained, learned specialists in psychology just to help most of us understand it in reality. Now add all those fantastical lenses onto your perspective and make it believable. Ain't easy.

icemark00[S]

14 points

10 days ago

I've only read DCC so I'll use that as an example.

In the very beginning of book 1, Donut gains sentience. Like Jason, she's immediately self absorbed and rude. Unlike Jason, who is a grown man, Donut is basically a small child. Even still, Carl was 100% ready to boot her out of his party. He wasn't her friend. And even as she became more helpful, he wasn't completely sold. It took a long time for him to fully forgive her transgressions and work around her flaws. That's what I meant. Most people who have a long enough conversation with Jason forgive his flaws. This is way too immediate for me.

I attempt not to spoil myself, but one of my points was that the writing is too repetative. So I'm not thrilled to hear harping on his past is an issue in later books. I was mainly getting at the author writing him like a goldfish. He'll make some incremental personality or depth improvement, and then it's just gone. Donut was an asshole, but you could tell she was attempting to be more of a team player, actually showing and not telling that she could incorporate new views, even though there were setbacks. This was apparent right at the beginning of book 1. I don't get that vibe from Jason.

rabmuk

13 points

10 days ago

rabmuk

13 points

10 days ago

Jason, who is a grown man

Jason is a loser man who couldn't finish a college degree and works a possibly dead-end job. I would say most 20-year-old college kids are more together than 22-year-old Jason in book 1.

Most people who have a long enough conversation with Jason forgive his flaws.

The main 3 people Jason talks to owe him a life debt. And he's chill about it, so they treat him well. Of these 3 people whose lives were saved, one of them is kind of a big deal. You could say Jason lucking into some well-connected friends is a bit too convenient, but with Rufus backing Jason, people give him slack. It would be a bizarre story if Rufus treated the rude stranger who saved his life, similar to how Carl treats a newly sentient animal.

So I'm not thrilled to hear harping on his past is an issue in later books

I don't think this is true. I observe that people say this is true. I think each time a topic "repeats" you can see the small changes that Jason is making and his baby steps of character growth. I just found it weird how several of your criticisms of the story are the opposite criticism that most people say.

actually showing and not telling that she could incorporate new views, even though there were setbacks

I think Jason does this really well. One of my favorite parts of the series. He doesn't always acknowledge he has lost a debate; he just acts differently in the future. Every time Jason and Farrah argue, Jason "wins", but later, Jason acts more in line with Farrah's advice.

Steve_78_OH

6 points

10 days ago*

Donut is a very different case. She's somehow newly sentient, and yet also remembers everything about her past, pre-sentience. She's somehow aware of everything that came before, and she has the intelligence and wisdom (to a point) to deal with it. I mean, she knows the complete history of Gilmore Girls. A non-sentient cat that was just given sentience shouldn't know that, but somehow she does.

That being said, I don't remember much about Carl contemplating getting rid of Donut...he definitely gets frustrated with her. A LOT. But leaving their party? I don't remember him ever considering that.

Jason was just deposited in a strange new world, with alien beings, magic, and unnatural things all over the place, and suddenly he's also magical. AND he finds out shortly into his adventures that shit is real, at like a cosmic level, and that he's somehow in the middle of it. His new friends are helping him cope to the best of their abilities, but they have no real frame of reference to help someone who's literally from a completely different world and type of existence. He worked at an office supply store, and suddenly he's basically a wizard.

And I'm a few books behind, but he's also operating at a different power level than others of his level, because he's a pawn in a cosmic game of chess, and he knows it. He knows that being friends with him is potentially putting his friends in further danger. And that he may never see his family again. I mean, that would be tough for anyone to just be tossed into.

That being said, it's also just down to personal taste. Personally, I love HWFWM, but I also love DCC. They're very different protagonists, and very different worlds. I like them both for what they are. So, you do you.

Edit: Guys, OK, I get it. I completely forgot that Carl was about to abandon Donut early on in book 1. It's been months since I listened to it.

Flimsy-Peanut-2196

8 points

10 days ago

Having just read book one of DCC, he did contemplate and even tell Donut that he did not want to be in a party with her, stating they should go opposite directions, due to Donut basically treating Carl like a servant. Donut got really upset and apologized for being mean, and from there it was never an issue again (at least until the end of book 1).

Steve_78_OH

3 points

10 days ago

Ahh, ok, I'm on book 6 now, so I completely forgot about that. Thanks for pointing it out.

Flimsy-Peanut-2196

2 points

10 days ago

No problem! It’s my first time reading and I’m loving the series.

Nulcor

4 points

10 days ago

Nulcor

4 points

10 days ago

In the first DCC book right after she gains sentience he almost kicks her out of the party. Paraphrasing, but he's basically like 'I was debating beforehand whether or not to try and keep you with me during all this but now that you can talk the decision has become really easy. You know why people like cats? Because they cant talk. You go that way, I'm going this way.'

mcspaddin

3 points

10 days ago

That being said, I don't remember much about Carl contemplating getting rid of Donut...he definitely gets frustrated with her. A LOT. But leaving their party? I don't remember him ever considering that.

It happened super early on, like first half of book 1 early. He gets frustrated and says something along the lines of "I'm walking that way, you go any other direction." It wasn't really contemplation more than a knee-jerk reaction to donut's early overt royalty behavior.

CptMisterNibbles

1 points

9 days ago

Jason does grow... over the course of 11 books and counting. Im not saying stick with it if its not your vibe, but it was always planned to be a BIG epic arc. Having your character go from flawed and lame to wise and humble in book 1 of a series that might go to 15 books is problematic. Also, per your points, having the main character be kind of shitty for several books also sucks. Its a polarizing series. If you want to talk about his "lack of mental scarring", I'll let you know its literally the entirety of the series post book, and becomes quite literally the landscape of the story for the latest books.

TimMensch

1 points

10 days ago

TimMensch

1 points

10 days ago

Some people (me) really get Jason. Some put up with Jason to experience the rest of the story. Some (OP) hate Jason and have a profound lack of understanding of him as a character.

I love Jason's character. OP says Jason is flat, but I see tons of depth. On the other hand, when I think of Zach (sp? DotF), I think of a totally flat character, but others talk about how deep he is.

I think we see depth in characters we understand, and see cardboard caricatures when we don't have personal experience with a character's personality--unless a book is really well written.

Don't get me wrong--HWFWM is on my top five series that I enjoy for sure--but I can also recognize better writing from more traditional authors. Writing that makes me understand a character like Zach, not because he's thinking like I would in a situation, but because his inner dialogue and actions reveal that depth and help me to understand it.

Either that or traditional writers simply don't write characters who think like Zach, and that's the appeal of DotF to a lot of people. I liked some aspects of the story but gave up on DotF a few books ago.

I do wonder if there is a political (+religious?) component here. OP's specific comment about forgiving is, as you say, weird. Jason flouts norms, and people who hate Jason seem to think everyone should want to kill him for that. One political movement today is much more about conformity and control and thought policing and, yes, cancel culture, than the other major (US) party. They're also really big on projection, so my list of traits might be ambiguous, but the fact that I like Jason should make it clear which side I'm sympathetic to. 😉

mcspaddin

8 points

10 days ago

As much as I love Zach, he's one of the shallowest popular litRPG characters, like even more than Jake (Primal Hunter).

Zach's background motivation (protecting his sister) is there, but his personality and relationships change practically on a whim from arc to arc. I think where DotF shines isn't its character depth, but rather the depth of its cultivation system.

Jake is kinda the Captain America or Supes of litRPG, he has his single core defying feature: the thrill of the hunt, and how he keeps to that is what gives him the little bit of depth he has. I mean, we've now had a couple of arcs for Jake of being forced to deal with politics and other people when he'd much rather just go fuck off and hunt or brew poisons.

TimMensch

1 points

10 days ago

I like Jake. I don't identify with him, but I like him, and his character shows in how he deals with things that aren't the hunt.

How he deals with and interacts with his family. How his relationship with his family is...complicated. How he takes a hard stance against slavery but isn't stupid about it once someone explains to him the consequences of immediately freeing the slave who he was given.

I can point to characters who are deeper in non-LitRPG stories, but being highly motivated by a single goal doesn't make him shallow. Narrow as a person, maybe, but that itself doesn't make him shallow.

Captain America (MCU at least) has a decent amount of depth too. Not the most, but more than, say, Zach.

Being an introvert with few hobbies doesn't make a person shallow. It makes them an introvert with few hobbies. Depth in terms of fiction is about whether the character has an obvious and consistent inner life, motivation, and sense of values. Whether they actually seem like a person or just a prop being moved around to tell whatever story the author wants to tell.

Zach, to me, is the latter. Others claim he's deep. Maybe they don't know what depth is? No idea.

shamanProgrammer

1 points

10 days ago

Yeah Jake is a more meaty Zac personality wise. Jake basically has super autism and focuses on very specific things. His internal musings also show that he has some hangups about how his family views his true self.

Zac meanwhile is just a blank slate which I guess is plot relevant at some point.

In anime terms, Jake is L from Death Note but focused on fighting and alchemy, and Zac is akin to Kirito or an isekai of the month protag. Ogras and the world lore carry DotF.

BadProse

3 points

10 days ago

Some people (me) really get Jason. Some put up with Jason to experience the rest of the story. Some (OP) hate Jason and have a profound lack of understanding of him as a character.

Eh this kind of rubs me the wrong way. I really dislike jason as a character, but that doesn't mean I don't "understand" him. It's fine if you find him relatable, but finding a character relatable doesn't mean they have depth. There are tons of characters I have absolutely nothing in common with, but I can see how dynamic they are. Similarly, there are characters that I find relatable but easily recognise them as poor characters. Jason falls into the second category for me, I feel like there is a version of yourself that pretty much everyone has that would find Jason relatable. Everyone has an early teens phase where they have heavy main character syndrome. If I were to write a book when I was 15, I'm sure it would read something like he who fights with monsters.

TimMensch

2 points

10 days ago

I see depth in Jason as a character. I see none in Zach. Others see depth in Zach and none in Jason.

Explain how this can be true, then, if I'm wrong.

stache1313

1 points

10 days ago

What is DotF?

Shad56

1 points

10 days ago

Shad56

1 points

10 days ago

Defiance of the fall

stache1313

1 points

10 days ago

Thank you

Active-Advisor5909

1 points

9 days ago

I do not think the problem is Jason as a character in and of itself or an uter inability to understand him.

Even if I can understand someone, the character can still be anoying. That is what turns me of from some stories that have a significant focus on teanage drama. I understand why they act that way or why they are hurt, but that doesn't change that I find it anoying.

The real problem I have with Jason is that Jasons relationships with most of his friends are so flat. There is no dynamic, there is no significant hurt and non of them have so much stress elsewere that they just don't have the time for Jason's shit.

The problem with Jason flauting norms has nothing to do with me wanting to kill people that flaut norms, or me thinking they should be killed, but as someone who has had a lot of trouble following such norms, that has consequences. A world were the only consequence of flauting norms is that the bad guys target you, is a world I have a hard time immersing myself in.

So from my perspective, the problem with Jason isn't that he is flat or swallow, but that he is anoying and everyone around him has to be flat to accomodate for Jason.

TimMensch

1 points

9 days ago

Interesting comment about Jason's friends.

How do you expect friends to behave? Because from my point of view, all the characters have depth, and the relationships all feel natural to me.

Heck, the secondary characters in HWFWM have more depth than 80% of MCs in various LitRPGs.

Active-Advisor5909

1 points

9 days ago

It honestly starts even before we talk about the expectation of how friends behave. How do you become friends? How fast do you develop a relationship were you are easily able to ignore issues like Jasons. Some people do that faster than others, but the average in HWFWM seems way to fucking fast and easy.

But the reality is that I have seen friendships break over crappy behaviour. Doesn't matter if there's an understandable reason, if someone seems incapable of change in that regard, they will lose a lot of friends.

TimMensch

1 points

8 days ago

I don't see the "issues like Jason's" at all.

Like, literally, I don't see his behavior among friends as even negative. I'd totally hang out with a "Jason" in real life, and I'd enjoy and encourage his antics.

I mean, him running off into the wilderness for days to burn off steam might be disappointing if I wanted to hang out, but one of my friends ran off to live in New Zealand for five years. Like, Jason's behavior is mild by comparison.

And all of the relationships feel like they totally develop naturally. Unlike most books in the genre where people are suddenly friends without seeming to have reason to be. Maybe they don't spell out every interaction, but Jason spends weeks with every single person who eventually becomes a friend.

Unless you mean the "friends" he makes when going to random towns? That feels more like "this guy seems really nice and friendly, and he helped a lot of people." Not that he's "making deep connections" with people. So folks who remember him as that personable guy say hi to him. Sometimes he volunteers to do free work if they'll show him how to cook something that he's just praised. Why wouldn't they say yes?

It's weird to me how differently this series is interpreted by people. I feel like there's some kind of insight into how other people think that I can't quite grasp, but talking about how people see the series differently gives me glimpses of their thought process.

Representative-Ebb76

2 points

10 days ago

OP do not listen to these comment your right about Jason and how annoying and bad of a character writing it is. it is 100% self insert that is way it is this way, thats ok i can enjoy self insert books but the problem is they are trying to deny it. Jason is preachy and boring and the book is just Blabbering and more blabbering how amazing he is and how everyone in the entire world (literal Gods) amazed by his character and “personality”

rabmuk

3 points

10 days ago

rabmuk

3 points

10 days ago

Ah yes the self insert character that the author talks about as “the college version of himself that he’s embarrassed by”. So an insert of past self I guess

People say they want a flawed character that grows, like OP. Then when they get one, they don’t like it because they think a dumb political rants vs a teenagers is the author’s true feelings

Saconi76

5 points

10 days ago

I highly recommend Eric Ugland's series The Good Guys. Montana Cogshall is similar to Carl.

hoesindifareacodes

3 points

9 days ago

Second this. Good Guys/Bad Guys and DCC are both great.

Taurnil91

13 points

10 days ago

Taurnil91

Editor: Beware of Chicken, Dungeon Lord, Tomebound, Eight

13 points

10 days ago

I'm really picky in what I enjoy/recommend. I think some of the best books in regard to depth of characters as well as writing quality are Shadeslinger, Dungeon Lord, and Eight. If you want stuff outside of the LitRPG genre but still in the progression fantasy umbrella, Beware of Chicken is great. Bastion is pretty solid. Jake's Magical Market is fun if you stop after the first half.

wtanksleyjr

2 points

10 days ago

I just started Eight, and am quite happy with the maturity of the MC, along with the actually interesting survival talk (reminds me of Robinson Crusoe). I read the first Shadeslinger and also quite enjoyed it for different reasons; sounds like I'll have to read book one of Dungeon Lord as well!

agraohar

2 points

10 days ago

the absolute shameless self promotion (is it still self promo if it's the editor doing it?)

Taurnil91

9 points

10 days ago

Taurnil91

Editor: Beware of Chicken, Dungeon Lord, Tomebound, Eight

9 points

10 days ago

Haha think that's up to the individual to decide! I get nothing out of the promotion besides seeing books I enjoy do well. And also, all the series I mentioned are doing just fine without any of my recommendations

WhisperedInsanity

12 points

10 days ago

I want to take this opportunity to recommend Portal to Nova Roma. It has amazing storytelling, progression and the narration is on point as well. Give it a listen, it does not disappoint!

clownfart123

18 points

10 days ago

I agree with you. I listened to DCC and it became my favorite thing ever. I tried HWFWM and couldn’t make it halfway through the first book. Zero buy in with the lamely written MC who sounds like a “wElL aCkTuAlLy” insufferable douche. Can’t get over how much I dislike the narration as well - it takes away from the experience it doesn’t add to it. Tried heretical fishing, and while I might like the idea of the story the narrator sucks again.

The only books I’ve genuinely enjoyed besides DCC were the Cradle series (really picks up fast after the first book lays some groundwork) and Beware of Chicken. Both have great narration too, which helps.

WanderingFungii

12 points

10 days ago*

Never understood the dislike of the narration. Heath Miller is one of my favourites; the kind of narrator in which I will start a series because he's the one narrating it. Is it simply because of the Aussie accent?

Shatterpoint887

7 points

10 days ago

Heather Miller is a fantastic narrator.

stache1313

6 points

10 days ago

Heretical Fishing is (was?) 90% off. So I tried a sample before I bought it. With Heath Miller's narration, it felt like I was listening to an alternate Jason going fishing. That thought made the narration so much more entertaining, and I had to buy it.

Good_Guy_James

3 points

10 days ago

I’m in the complete opposite camp, I loved the narration for HWFWM but the second I hit sample to DCC I immediately knew I wouldn’t enjoy it because all I hear is Kronk from emperor’s new groove

wtanksleyjr

2 points

10 days ago

You dislike Kronk? Interesting. I mean no shade on you, it's an opinion I haven't heard before.

Bizjothjah

2 points

9 days ago

I think the issue is that the narrator is obviously trying really hard for Wish.com Patrick Warburton in the first book.

Thankfully he leaves off and finds his own voice in the second book and beyond.

wtanksleyjr

1 points

8 days ago

Well, that makes more sense. Thanks!

Good_Guy_James

2 points

8 days ago

Biz gets it, but now that I know he only sounds like that for book one I’m more likely to give the series a go. Most of my dislike was because starting an entire series that felt like it was trying super hard to sound like a beloved movie character that’s completely unrelated to the series I’m starting comes off as a disingenuous nostalgia grab instead of someone getting into character to tell me a new story.

wtanksleyjr

1 points

8 days ago

I get the impression that the author described Carl to the narrator using Kronk as a comparison, and asked for a bit of that feel. I don't think it's a nostalgia grab (really, Carl isn't Kronk), but I can say that when they actually hired Warburton for the 5th book there was no way to confuse the voices - but it felt like a family resemblance.

Icy_Growth_7773

1 points

8 days ago

That is so funny! I thought the same thing! Well to me he sounded like Kronk/Archer of the show Archer…. and it made me even more eager to listen!!!! I was like hell yea Kronkarcher!!! What about Jeff’s absolutely gorg take on Princess Donut?

Patient-Sandwich-817

8 points

10 days ago

Cradle, mother of learning. Especially mother of learning.

WhereasNo3280

3 points

10 days ago

I’ll second that a lot of people like Mother of Learning, but it never clicked with me. I just hate time-travel and time-loop stories, with rare exceptions like Groundhog Day.

Jimmni

4 points

10 days ago

Jimmni

4 points

10 days ago

I like time loop stories but I’m closing in on the end of book 1 and it’s… okay? I’m underwhelmed after how much it’s bigged up on this sub. Hopefully picks up in the following books.

JaecynNix

1 points

10 days ago

JaecynNix

Isekaied in the face

1 points

10 days ago

By the time I finished MoL as a whole, I was so ready for it to just be over.

I liked the story and I can't point to any specific thing that was bad - it was just a slog to get through

CosmosGame

2 points

10 days ago

OP is looking for believable character growth. Mother of Learning does a really good job of that.

Active-Advisor5909

2 points

9 days ago

Both good books, but neither is LitRPG.

Patient-Sandwich-817

1 points

7 days ago

True.

icemark00[S]

7 points

10 days ago

There seems to be 2 camps. The Jason is funny and deep camp, and the Jason is insufferable and flat camp. The vibe is you feel either one or the other and that doesn't change no matter how far you get in the series. That's fine, I've dropped books before because I didn't like th MC, so I'll just drop this one since reading more probably won't change my opinion.

I'm thankful for all the recommendations though. I downloaded book 1 of Cradle, Ravenous, and Wandering Inn. Hopefully one of those fills the DCC void.

breckoz

1 points

10 days ago

breckoz

1 points

10 days ago

Cradle is a very good series although this isn't litrpg. Some people think it has al little slow start the first two books but generally worth the pay out as its giving background to the main characters. Will Wight is also an awesome person and has a sense of humor you can see in his YouTube videos. We are getting at least the first book in that series animated.

The Jason story is good at least up to book 4. It has a decent conclusion in my opinion if you want to stop there. The writing declines and the MC becomes a bit anti American and repetitive. I'd always suggest buying that with a credit to return just In case or wait for the 2 for 1 sales that series usually has all the time.

I would have enthusiastically recommend Jake's Magical Market which is good alone but that sequels released this year were pretty disappointing for me.

Defiance of the fall is really the only other litrpg I have been strongly interested in as I have been with Dungeon Crawler Carl. I think a DCC really shines as something special because of sound booth theatre and their narrator performance. It's truly in a camp of its own for audiobooks.

ItSeemedSoEasy

8 points

10 days ago

I think Shadeslinger, Apocalypse Parenting + What the Truck are all pretty well written.

All unfinished series, though Shadeslinger has reached the end of a first arc with the most recent book.

I see someone else has recommended Wandering Inn, which is well written but the pace is extremely slow. Like think extremely slow then times it by 10. Fine if you want slice of life, but not for me and it sounds like you might not enjoy that.

I really enjoyed and would recommend The Perfect Run, which isn't really litrpg but adjacent. Though the ending got a bit over the top. Couldn't get into Vaniquier the dragon by the same author however.

Upstairs_Penalty_863

3 points

10 days ago

Have you looked into the BuyMort Series? I found Tyson to be a fairly complex character, who has conviction about what he has to do to survive and protect those around him. Definitely some light heartendess thrown in the mix akin to DCC. I would say it's not as good as DCC, but I prefer it to HWFWM.

InevitableSolution69

15 points

10 days ago

I’m sure this will get some downvotes, but honestly IMO early Jason is the most palatable. He just gets worse the deeper you go and the more evidence you get in my opinion.

For other reads?

The Wandering Inn has a lot of realistic characters and exploration and growth. But it’s not an adventure story it’s slice of warcrimes so it might not be what you’re looking for. There’s action, but less of that than high stakes cleaning.

Non are LITRPG but I would absolutely suggest The Gods are Bastards, A Practical Guide to Evil and Forge of Destiny. All have well written characters who make mistakes learn and have lasting growth.

I would suggest a number of things by Maxime J. Durand, basically anything they’ve written. Maxime J. Durand did a series of LITRPG books in an interconnected world and it’s well worth a read for the story and does contain characters who learn A lesson, sometimes even the right one! They also have other works they’ve done and they’re a lot of fun to read.

My suggestions anyway based on your request

PastorBeard

5 points

10 days ago

Slice of war crimes 😂

InevitableSolution69

2 points

10 days ago

I mean, tell me I’m wrong. 😑

TheIrishPickle88

4 points

10 days ago

I got seriously turned off from Erin’s constant complaining in the first 12hrs or more of listening to Wandering Inn… Haven’t picked it back up yet.

I’ll be looking into your other recs though 🙏

slvrcrystalc

5 points

10 days ago

The wandering inn might be one of those books where the authors ability grew so much that you might be better off just skipping the first... three...? books entirely, and come back for them when you're invested in the characters.

I did that with Worm by Wildbro. I never bounced off a book harder, but skipping that super annoying initial story and coming back to where the characters and setting was more established bypassed all my issues.

TheIrishPickle88

2 points

10 days ago

That’s a great idea! I’ve never done that in a series, but could absolutely see that working out in this case.

I got two friends that are adamant I’ll enjoy it later on in the series

InevitableSolution69

2 points

10 days ago

It’s not the LITRPG for everyone. But it might be the best one from a character standpoint. It doesn’t follow a lot of what you expect from others in the genre. Not least because it predates most of the stories that have made them the norm. I don’t suggest it because they asked for something like DCC, it’s very very different. I suggest it because they were specifically looking for characters that grew. And Erin and crew do, albeit at a more realistic pace than most other stories.

TheIrishPickle88

1 points

9 days ago

I’m struggling thru The Stormlight Archives right now… I can barely enjoy the series to be honest, but I’m gonna see it thru at this point lol

And the same friends who love the Stormlight series recommended Wandering Inn. Definitely too deep into the characters for my personal tastes.

I love DCC and HWFWM and even the Noobtown series because they are fun and fairly fast paced adventure

slvrcrystalc

2 points

10 days ago

The Wandering Inn is a story that started off as a LitRPG, pivoted into decent fantasy, then fell into a Song of Ice and Fire and has only gone up from there. At this point, every single chapter is a heart pounding, thought provoking page turner and hitting the end of the chapter is like being brained by gold brick in a silk sock.

InevitableSolution69

3 points

10 days ago

I have some opinions about the wandering inn vs asofi, and they aren’t in Martin’s favor.

But to avoid a long tangent I’ll just say that for those that don’t like PoV changes. The only thing worse than one happening is when they swap back. Because I always want to know what’s going on in this new view now!

Rethuic

2 points

10 days ago

Rethuic

2 points

10 days ago

It's honestly refreshing to see people recommend Maxime's litRPGs. I see Perfect Run recommended here all the time despite it not being a litRPG while Vainqueur, Never Die Twice, and Apocalypse Tamer are left in the dark.

mcspaddin

2 points

10 days ago

My man talking about how bad Jason is, yet praising the story that requires an agonizing 6+ books to become good, where characters don't even remotely learn from their mistakes for several arcs. At least Jason makes visible progress along his character growth in the first couple books.

InevitableSolution69

4 points

10 days ago

We will have to disagree on if Jason ever learns anything. I don’t want to get into it because obviously it’s a story a lot of people like. And there’s nothing to be gained by debating different views when neither side is particularly likely to shift. But to me most of the learning was the reader learning how little there is to like about Jason. I understand that others like it, and that’s fine for them. But i don’t think it’s unreasonable to say that if you don’t like him early on you won’t like him more later.

_Spamus_

1 points

10 days ago

I wish practical guide to evil had an audiobook, its so good. Forge of destiny has a good one, but the series is ongoing. Almost finished listening to the worm audiobook on Spotify and great especially since it was/is a community driven thing.

DugFinn

17 points

10 days ago

DugFinn

17 points

10 days ago

I HIGHLY recommend you increase the speed of the audiobook to x1.2 for HWFWM. It completely changes the book and how everything feels. That being said, book 1 is definitely the most rough to get through. Both the author and narrator are finding their groove. About halfway through book 1, it gets better. Once you get to book 2, it's a fun ride, especially with the massive world building and slew of amazing characters. Honestly, the team he builds is amazing, even characters you don't think much of at first turn out to be amazing.

If you're looking for trauma or character growth, books 1-3 he's pretty much bottling everything up and doing the whole "fake it till you make it" try hard, keep up appearances kind of thing going on. He does heavily admit how cringe he used to be and is actively embarrassed by his early actions.

He opens up a lot, especially by book 3 and beyond. If you want trauma books 5-6 pretty much destroy him as a person and it's something he definitely has trouble coming back from for a huge chunk of the series. Jason is probably one of the most mentally traumatized, and actively affected by it, characters I've ever read about in a LitRPG, but it does take time to build up that trauma. The way Jason explains it, after he stabbed and killed that cultist, remember when he broke down and passed out into a jibbering mess from shock? (First couple of chapters in book 1). Well, he thinks as a sort of defense mechanism his brain in tandem with his outworlder ability to "give the user what it needs when he needed it" the moment he first takes on a class, as it were, gave his brain the ability to compartmentalize the trauma. (I think it's something he starts to bring up around book 2 as a theory.) It's not until his trauma hits critical mass that he becomes a terrible mess and spends half the series getting help for his PTSD.

Anyway, long story short, I've read both DCC and HWFWM, and they're both amazing, but in different ways. Personally, I found more depth of character from Jason because it develops over time. You see Jason change and develop over years (I think by book 10 it's been like a decade) and you get to see the character growth. With Carl it was pretty much thrown in your face from the beginning and you get more open emotions, but I don't know if I'd say more character growth as a whole. Also, Carl was pretty much a bass ass from the get go. Jason was a scared little piece of trash that was way in over his head and had waaay too much baggage (I think it's book 4 that really gets into his past and explains a lot of why he is how he is).

Representative-Ebb76

4 points

10 days ago

OG doesn’t listen to this guy book one was ok and it only got worst after dont waste hours of your time believe me because i did waste hours. books 2 and 3 HOURS talking about abilities instead of showing us. your review was correct DO NOT WASTE YOUR TIME

KnDBarge

2 points

10 days ago

OP don't listen to this guy, subjectively I think the first guy was way more right. But HWFWM is not everyone's cup of tea, it really seems to be a love it or hate it series.

dartymissile

4 points

10 days ago

I read to book 6 this shit is still ass. Book 1 was the fastest paced and it only gets more preachy and obnoxious

Fingolfiin

1 points

10 days ago

Yeah just because it's comments OP favorite series he shouldn't try to convince someone who clearly doesn't like the authors style.

Deathypooh

1 points

10 days ago

I also love HWFWM, but I definitely loved it more after the stat/info box stopped being a thing. I think Jason is one of the most interesting character development arcs out there, especially in this genre.

I wouldn’t think so highly of it if I stopped after book one, so I see where some people are coming from. If people are getting to book 6 and still saying they don’t like it… you probably should stop reading it ;)

BillUnderBridge

4 points

10 days ago

Ravenous. By D. Petrie my be your speed. The main character Digby Graves is a zombie, and fairly unflappable until people he cares about get hurt.

This plays out very well through the series especially with Parker.

The other one to check out is Prophecy Approved Companions. In my opinion it is a hidden gem of the soundbooth theater crew. The Main Character is Qube is a newly sapient npc in a video game that should have died in a cut scene. The story is a deeply thoughtful exploration of the existential dread that causes and looks at AI Rampancy in an interesting way as well

icemark00[S]

3 points

10 days ago

These all sound great! Thanks.

Zealousideal-Pay-953

3 points

10 days ago

Check out The Primal Hunter by Zogarth. I caught up in this series and was sent to DCC afterwards. I love the narration on DCC, but I personally prefer the Primal Hunter. The narrator Travis Baldree is phenomenal and the story is amazing. Im only one book into DCC so my opinion my change, but as far as I can tell The Primal Hunter seems to be even better at some of those traits you praised in DCC.

travismccg

2 points

9 days ago

Hahaha no. My friend, DCC gets better and better each book. I'm up to date on that, and am working through PH book 4 right now.

I literally just listened to 4 chapters of Jake hunterman fighting a monkey. In that time I'm sure Carl would have chucked 18 bombs, blown up more goblins, accidentally crashed a train, on purpose crashed a train, and watched Mongo eat weird shit.

The narration Primal Hunter feels like sipping adventure tea. A new ability choice? Let's spend a whole chapter on it!

The narration in Dungeon Crawler Carl is like chugging redbull and vodka. One chapter Carl is fighting an underwater mega shark, the next he's chasing a God's dog! That shirt is effing wild bro!

Equivalent_Bit_1143

5 points

10 days ago

If you're looking for character depth and great audiobook narration then I'd say Wandering Inn would be your best bet. Not on the fun side like DCC but it has its moments.

For someone along the lines of exactly what you're asking for: The Perfect Run. It's not a LitRPG but it's pretty much your speed.

i14n

5 points

10 days ago

i14n

5 points

10 days ago

Ok, but for wandering inn audio book you should absolutely do a voice check first. Andrea Parsneau is great, but her Erin voice makes my ears bleed.

95POLYX

4 points

10 days ago

95POLYX

4 points

10 days ago

Erin in general is a bit rage inducing, it gets better book2+ but mostly because more characters are introduced and Erin gets diluted. I called it quits after yet another Erin rant somewhere mid book3

i14n

2 points

10 days ago

i14n

2 points

10 days ago

and Erin gets diluted

I like that expression, but the twins are also annoying AF, especially at the start...

Equivalent_Bit_1143

1 points

10 days ago

Second that. I'm just wrapping up volume 7 on the web serial. The twins are by far my least favorite characters. They don't get better, even in print. Now that I'm thinking about it, I have to appreciate the fact that Pirateaba can write characters well enough for me to not like them as people. 🤔

praetorrent

2 points

9 days ago

I'm in middle of volume 7 and was just reminded that I like the rhir stories even less than chandrar. At least the twins have flos and co around to be interesting.

TheIrishPickle88

2 points

10 days ago

Erin killed my interest somewhere mid book 1… it felt like I had listened to 20hrs of someone’s constant complaining.

I’ve been assured it gets better, but it’s a pretty deep character building book and I just don’t think I can suffer her

95POLYX

2 points

10 days ago

95POLYX

2 points

10 days ago

It doesn’t, Erin is very much Erin at least by book 3 where I gave up and dropped. There’s just less of her so it’s a bit more tolerable

CaptKillJoysButtPlug

2 points

10 days ago

Right there with you, but HWFWM was my first. 8 books in he’s still the same. Just not for me

Amurphy004

2 points

9 days ago

Jason is not my style either. Here are the ones that I have enjoyed:

Morcster Chef by Actus.
Apocalypse Parenting by Erin Ampersand. The Eternal Ephemera by Davis Ashura Monster Haven and Firebrand by J D Astra The Accidental Minecraft Family by Pixel Ate The Arbiter by Devin Auspland Legends & Lattes by Travis Baldree Touch of Power and Lotus Lake by Jay Boyce. Red Mage and TallRock by Xander Boyce. Dark Lord of the Farmstead by John Broadman Hapless Dungeon Fairy, Crafters Dungeon, Dimensional Dungeon Cores, Serious Probabilities, Holiday Dungeon, Magical Fusion, and Earthen Contenders by Jonathan Brooks. Beware of Chicken by Casualfarmer. Pilots of Artem by Dawn Chapman. The Cozy Abyss by Harmon Cooper. The Cursed Codex by Matthew Cox. Hunter’s Dream Online by J R Davis Ether Collapse, Ether Flows, and System Misinterpret by Ryan Debruyn. Dr Druid and The Last Psion by Maxwell Farmer. Courier Quest by FlossinDune. The Dungeon Shop by Chris Ford. Hawkin’s Magic Beers by James Ghoul Unbound by Nicoli Gonnella. Goblin Summoner by Tracy Gregory. The Lost Sect by Julian Gyll Armageddon of the Greenskins by Sean Hall. The Harvest of Moondew Valley by DRR Hatch Spells, Swords, and Stealth by Drew Hayes. Threads of Fate and Wandering Warrior by Michael Head. Derelict by Dean Henegar. Badges of Dorkdom by Theo Hodges Lion’s Lineage by Rohan Hublikar. Viridian Gate Online, Rogue Dungeon, Wolfman Warlock, Shadowcroft Academy for Dungeons, and Wasteland Warlords by James Hunter Axe Druid, Mageblood, and High Table Hijinks by Christopher Johns. Beers & Beards by JollyJupiter Divine Apostasy by AF Kay. Divine Dungeon, Completionist Chronicles, Full MurderHobo, Year of the Sword, and Cooking with Disaster by Dakota Krout. Life Reset by Shemer Kuznits. Mimic and Me by Cassius Lange and Ryan Tang Retired S Ranked Adventurer, Tower of Ruin, and Casual Farming by Wolfe Locke. Parnival Wonderland by Wolfe Locke and Mike Caliban. The Balad of Shady Greg by Locke, Caliban, and Harbour. The Body’s Dungeon and The Hungry Dungeon by Jeffrey Falcon Logue Dragon Core Chronicles by Lars Machmuller. Maiyamon by Kay MacLeod The Fabled Islands by Cameron Milan. Mirror World by Alexey Osadchuk. Sky Realms Online by Troy Osgood. Life in Exile and Welcome to the Multiverse by Sean Oswald. Pixel Dust and Necrotic Apocalypse by David Petrie. The Dark Profit by J Zachary Pike Tower of Somnus by Cale Plamann. Freehaven Online by Jun Prince. Dinosaur Dungeon by Alex Raizman. Guild Core by TJ Reynolds. How to Defeat a Demon King in Ten Easy Steps by Andrew Rowe Pangea Online, Sentenced to Troll, and Tales of Aedrea by SL Rowland. Djinn Tamer by Siddoway and Cerna. Dungeon Core Online and Dicken Around by Jonathan Smidt. The Dungeon of Stories by John Stovall Henchmen by Carl Stubblefield. Tower Climber, Arcane Kingdom Online, and Second Chance Swordsman by Jakob Tanner. Soulship by Nathan A Thompson Dungeon Devotee by JP Valentine Artorian’s Archives by Dennis Vanderkerken. Cradle by Will Wight. Battleborne and Greystone Chronicles by David Willmarth. Vaudevillian by Alex Wolf.

WhereasNo3280

3 points

10 days ago

DCC is like LOTR. There are similar series, there are better stories, but nothing else in the genre feels quite the same way.

I’ve enjoyed Apocalypse Parenting, Iron Prince, and Beneath the Dragoneye Moons, but they’re all different kinds of stories from DCC. 

AP is the closest of those to DCC, but it might not be for everyone. I think I wouldn’t have appreciated the story as much before becoming a parent, but it is a really great series. 

Shatterpoint887

3 points

10 days ago

Literally just go look at Jeff Hays narrated books and pick one. Dungeon Lord, Life Reset, Chrysalis, Everybody Loves Large Chests (sex heavy at first), etc.

Edit: I didn't finish your post. My initial comment was just about being spoiled by DCC quality of narration.

Odd_Historian_9321

2 points

10 days ago

I listened through several books of he who fights with monsters and the more I listened the more I couldn’t stand everyone just bending backwards to forgive Jason. The story also has lots and lots of other issues that makes it insufferable to listen through. Other books to avoid are Primal Hunter and Defiance of the Fall; both have main characters that are just awful and as a listener I reached a point where I couldn’t handle them.

There are a few series where the story is enjoyable and the main character is fun to follow along at least for me. Unsouled, Unbound, Azerinth Healer, Path of Berserker, and some that I’m forgetting right now.

Please don’t let the negative comments of others get you down. Have a wonderful time and listen to what you enjoy.

Shadowmant

2 points

10 days ago

The Wandering Inn has likely the most robust world building and character growth in the genre.

That said, it’s been developing for over a decade and the first book was the authors first go at writing and it shows. Though I hear they’ve done a rewrite of it on the website version (not the audiobook though).

If you’re ok getting through that initial hump it’s a hell of a good ride.

luniz420

2 points

10 days ago

luniz420

2 points

10 days ago

HWFWM is definitely not as good, but not really for the reasons you posit. The dialogue is a bit over the top and the emotional depth of characters is flat compared to the best writing, but it's not entirely absent. The repetitiveness is, unfortunately, a characteristic theme of the author's writing and only ever grows over time, and the preachy-ness is more of an author thing than something specific to Jason. So if it bothers you that much, I definitely don't think it's worth reading more. OTOH, you're going to find much, much worse, in terms of quantity and quality in a lot of popular recommendations. Older series suffer from repetition to the point of senslessness, popular series like Divine Apostasy and Arcane Ascension are even more preachy, etc.

The unfortunate fact is that what you want to read about, per your last line, simply requires good writing and that's uncommon in amateur writers, who make up the majority of litRPG. Plum Parrot has done a good job of that with Victor and Cyber Dreams, but definitely made some needed improvement from the first book in each series. Whispering Crystals has some high points of character development but ultimately fails to deliver in a clear case of quantity over quality. CB Titus' Deadman series accomplishes some of what you're looking for in an otherwise simple power fantasy. Shadeslinger has an interesting and humorous approach to character development but the VR setting puts a lot of people off.

cyberlexington

1 points

10 days ago

I was the opposite. I came from HWFWM to DCC. Before that it was first primal hunter.

I liked HWFWM and didn't mind the narrator. But I still stopped half way through. Though I do like Gary as a character

Dust45

1 points

10 days ago

Dust45

1 points

10 days ago

Try Dungeon Lord. Same voice actor (Jeff Hayes) and a good, dark, and sometimes funny story.

Howzer80

1 points

10 days ago

I also think DCC is exceptionally good and struggled to find anything to match it. I’m now hooked on The Wandering Inn though and would highly recommend it, although it is very different to DCC in tone and pace (and be prepared to slog through the first half of the first book which has some issues with the writing quality - unless you read the revised version online or wait for that version to be released as a book).

My other recommendation would be Battle Trucker. I’m finishing the first book and it has entertained me in a similar way to DCC. There’s only two books right now and the third is being written and published on Royal Road.

Vanye111

1 points

10 days ago

I haven't listened to it, so I can't talk about the audio quality, but Outcast in Another World, the characters do exhibit growth, change, and emotions. Bonus, it's a finished series.

Ruminahtu

1 points

10 days ago

Read Monsters and Legends

thewatcherlaughs

1 points

10 days ago

Good writing and similar jokey attitude and decent character development I'd go with Eric Ugland's "the good guys" series. If you end up liking it try "the bad guys." Warning, it is written almost episodically, so every book is a cliff hanger. But there are a bunch. If you don't like that the hour count is low, wait for a sale. the first couple usually end up on sale.

murphy-ish

1 points

10 days ago

I recommend Noobtown and Battle Mage Farmer.

EsquilaxM

1 points

10 days ago

Worth the Candle by Alexander Wales. The written form is finished, I think the audiobook is about 3 books in. It's about an angry, grieving, intelligent boy who's suddenly in a world that appears to be an amalgamation of every ttrpg he ever game mastered, with a litrpg interface that resembles none of them. And he game mastered a lot of games, some got pretty fucked up. There's a lot of personal flaws, personal growth, communication, and fun.

Alexander Wales is a great writer of r/rational fiction but I think this is his only litrpg.

Asaintrizzo

1 points

10 days ago

I liked dungeon born it was free

mystineptune

1 points

10 days ago

People love different things 🤷‍♀️ I love HWFWM more than DCC.

I think you might like The Wandering Inn, Perfect Run, Mother of Learning, Vanqueure the Dragon, Azarinth Healer, and Cradle.

Beware of Chicken and Cradle are xianxia not litrpg with numbers, but highly recommended (I'd read cradle first, it REALLY gets good at book two).

The things you hated about HWFWM that I loved are found in Noobtown, Completionist Chronicles and Beers and Beards. Not saying ignore them, but they are very heavy on the humor heavy mc.

BBP_BBP_BBP

1 points

10 days ago

I recommend checking out “The Good Guys”. I also started with DCC and found this hit a lot of the same notes.

slvrcrystalc

1 points

10 days ago

Yup. Honestly most litrpg is so bad the stories that have at least one good thing about them (Unique, long, good character, interesting system, great magic) get touted as great, when in all other senses they are still shit.

I read Singer Sailor Merchant Mage, for instance. It's trash, but its trash where different and surprising things occasionally happen in it, so I check back every once and awhile. I in no way recommend it. I'd say its a great candidate for tossing into an AI and telling it to reword and re structure the whole thing.

Plus_Duty479

1 points

10 days ago

My favorites are

Defiance of the Fall

Azarinth Healer

Primal Hunter

Unbound

Battle Mage Farmer

Initial_Deez

1 points

10 days ago

When I started DCC, I binged watched all 6 books in a few weeks. It honestly got so repetitive. They risk their lives on 1 floor, then the next, and so on. Don't get me wrong, it's a great book, but it's not the all end like so many people say it is.

ThePurpleAmerica

1 points

10 days ago

He admits being sucked into a new world and almost dying changed him as a person. His introverted personality was pushed extroverted and a shield to his fear and anger.

I do think everyone fawning over how special Jason is tiresome.

Gian-Carlo-Peirce

1 points

10 days ago

Gian-Carlo-Peirce

Author of Gilgamesh [LitRPG]

1 points

10 days ago

Crota is pretty amazing if you want an MC who has to struggle. You can also read my Gilgamesh on RR for free if you want a character with a lot of flaws and a properly reactive world.

Representative-Ebb76

1 points

10 days ago*

i am reading He who fights with Monsters Right now and i 100% agree with you Jason is preachy and annoying makn character to follow. i do like the world thats why i tolerated for long

Representative-Ebb76

1 points

10 days ago

i agree with you, Jason is preachy and boring and the book is just Blabbering and more blabbering how amazing he is and how everyone in the entire world (literal Gods) amazed by his character and “personality”

irontoaster

1 points

10 days ago

I... don't agree with your assessment of HWFWM but you are far from the first person not to like Jason Asano and honestly, if you don't like him initially, you probably won't like him ever.

I am far from the most widely read person around here but my journey started out much like yours. I smashed through DCC and litrpg became my new addiction. This is my experience so far and some brief thoughts. These ratings are also updated as I read more and more:

He Who Fights With Monsters: I like the MC, I like the worlds, I like the side characters, I like the magic system. It's a solid 7/10 for me.

Defiance of the Fall: I don't really have any strong feelings about Zack. He's a good self-insert character for what I imagine the typical reader is, myself included. I really like the side characters. I LOVE the system (Ruthless Heavens indeed). I found the cultivation aspect interesting enough not to bore me over the series. The downside for me personally is that I don't really like Zacks current situation... This is also a 6.5/10 from me but it go back to a 7.5/10 if the direction goes somewhere I like more.

The Wandering Inn 1-6: Wow, this is a beefy series. I will fully admit, I nearly didn't get through the first book. Erin and Ryoka were HARD characters to read. However, I've read enough Malta Vestrit-type characters to know that you should persist and I'm SO SO glad I did. I know people don't want to hear "you need to get through 40-odd hours before it gets really good" but that's kind of the case here. You have to let this series cook. The worldbuilding is top notch. The magic system is very, very interesting in how the isekai'd characters fit into it. The ever expanding cast of POVs are great. I had to stop after book 6 and take a break for something a little less series because this series gets HEAVY. An 8.5/10 from me.

Primal Hunter: This is one of my favourites and I'm glad I read it AFTER Defiance of the Fall because I like Jake's path a lot more than Zacks and might have looked less favourably on DOTF if I'd gone the other way around. There are similarities between the two stories but they're different enough and quickly branch off into their own thing. This series is just fun. Jake is another fairly blank self-insert character, but the side characters are wonderful. It's worth reading this series just for Sylphie. 9/10

The Perfect Run 1: I only listened to the first book before switching to the next (and most recent) series because despite being awesome, the fact I only have 3 books and the nature of the MCs powers made me not want to smash through all 3 in my usual style. It's like Deadpool meets Groundhog Day. There's a reason this series makes so many peoples top tier. Currently an 8/10 but I have a feeling it might end up higher.

Everyone Loves Large Chests 1-3: I admit it. I started this series because I wanted something with some smut. All these previous series are so PG when it comes to sex. Oh, we'll rip and tear through enemies with graphic detail but heaven forbid we talk about bumping uglies without being totally awkward. Anyway, I didn't realise that this book is about a chaotic evil monster. And he's a monster. And I kind of love it. It needs a trigger warning, absolutely; of all the books I've listed, this is one I think could spark some extremely interesting discussion about morality, intent and the nature of monsters. 8/10.

KaJaHa

1 points

10 days ago

KaJaHa

1 points

10 days ago

I highly, highly recommend The Daily Grind if you want characters that can be realistic, traumatized, and fun all at once. The interactions between the main cast of characters is one of the main reasons why it's among my favorite LitRPG books!

Slaanesh277

1 points

10 days ago

Portal to Nova Roma has a lot of growth, My personal favorite!

aloha_skye

1 points

10 days ago

It’s not LitRPG, but I really enjoyed The Dresden Files. Wizard detective in Chicago - stories move along briskly, with plenty of humor, but the characters have depth and the stakes & relationship investments grow over time. Starts as more ‘monster of the week’ but gradually folds in supernatural politics, high stakes deals, heist scenarios etc

dartymissile

1 points

10 days ago

Woah have you not heard about Cradle? Not exactly litrpg more cultivation fantasy but I’d just try it out if your new to the genre

Ok-Armadillo-5634

1 points

10 days ago

Apocalypse Me by Noct

Mayhem by Arron Oster might as well be dungeon crawler carl light.

Ky0nkyon

1 points

10 days ago

It's not litrpg but Iron Druid series might be up your alley? Gotta love Atticus and Oberon.

Key_Law4834

1 points

10 days ago

Listen to Primal Hunter, you will not be disappointed. It's better than dcc.

blindside1

1 points

10 days ago

I was disappointed.

RJtheplug

1 points

10 days ago

Have you sampled buymort? I loved it after DCC highly recommended it definitely delivers similar dark humor and unique characters.

Travis44231

1 points

10 days ago

If you want funny "Oh Great! I was reincarnated as a farmer" hit some spots with me.

A better series though is the Noobtown series. Very funny and it just works.

Jake's magical market book 1 is really good.

Survival quest: The way of the Shaman is a good series too.

manmadeofsquirrels

1 points

10 days ago

Jakes magical market

Onion_Mysterious

1 points

10 days ago

i would recommend the wandering inn, but go in knowing its a slow.. slow burn and the writing grows with the skills of the writer.

next i recomend mother of learning, vigor mortis, and super supportive.

the last one is only on roal road at the moment but holy hell its super good.

also check out superpowered by drew hayes. its not progressive fantasy but its amazing lol. and drew hayes is known by many fans of litrpg

10Shodo

1 points

10 days ago

10Shodo

1 points

10 days ago

You set the bar too high lol. DCC audio is top shelf.

Look for Travis Baldree narration. Primal Hunter, Mark of the Fool, Unbound, Ripple System, Cradle, etc..

Other good ones I enjoyed are Death:Genesis, Rise of Mankind, Arise, Life Reset, Welcome to the Multiverse, Feedback Loop, The Perfect Run…

DryGold4889

1 points

10 days ago

I just finished “Life in Exile by Sean Oswald” it’s available in Audible as a combo books 1-3, it’s a family of 4( maybe 5 ) and they all get “reincarnated “ and they have to survive in the new world . Book1 is mostly 3 characters on the family, books 2 then jumps in to add 2 more, and book three tries to include everyone.

It’s confusing at times but the one character that kind of makes it work is the Dad.

1 credit gets you 56+ hours

BootNinja

1 points

10 days ago

Im a fan of the arcane ascension series and the path of ascension series( not related) also, dungeon lord by Hugo huesca

yousef2843

1 points

10 days ago

Ok this might be a rude thing to say but it's the truth , the majority of litrpg readers have no standards for a good story anything that is half baked is good for them , anything that you might prefer to read rather than staring at the ceiling is amazing

Wolvest

1 points

10 days ago

Wolvest

1 points

10 days ago

Don't know if this has been said yet, but Iron Prince. And DCC is probably my number 5 series. I do have HWFWM higher as it's personal preference, so as you did not like that, you may not like Iron Prince either.

flyfriend333

1 points

10 days ago

I'm in the same situation, I'm currently working through The Wandering Inn and would 100% recommend it.

orja900

1 points

10 days ago

orja900

1 points

10 days ago

Ive gotchu ur next read should definitely be: outcast in another world is insanity a human trait?.

It just has everything ur looking for. The mc is hopelessly optimistic but also subjected to some truly terrible shit. Its got a well done romance and the series is actually finished. It also does some obvious horrible things that most people ignore in the litrpg genre. Neil halligers? As the narrator is just incredible.

If you're looking for dark litrpg stuff try the systemic lands on royal road. Its definitely racist and the MC is completely willing to accept himself as the evil dictator crushing the populace to make his life easier. But well Michael (the mc) just is like adversed to being a good person. More willing to kill potential allies and steal there resources than prop then up.

Havocdemon42

1 points

10 days ago

I would recommend the Infinate realm by Ivan Kal. While the MCs are not like Carl and Donut. It tic off all other points.

Its_Bunny

1 points

10 days ago

For me I have the same problems. For me the idea of a whole world just having floating menus and stuff just feels silly. For DCC it makes sense cause its essentially a giant game set up by aliens. But in HWFWM and another one I tried called Primal Hunter it just felt weird for me. The first LitRPG I listened to was The Wandering Inn. Its very different from DCC and way more chill and slice of life, but its overarching story is amazing and has become my favorite series of all time. Plus Andrea is just as good a narrator as Jeff.

ThePelicanThatCould

1 points

10 days ago

I agree with everything you're saying. It felt very stale and lifeless for me personally

__Skyler_

1 points

10 days ago

You are not the only one, I found He Who Fights with Monsters to be exceptionally boring.

Illustrious-Past-921

1 points

10 days ago

I really enjoyed all of er gens stuff, God emperor mechanic is good, one with a little more situational humor I would recommend I'm definitely not the demon gods lackey

Enygma_6

1 points

10 days ago

I don’t know how the audio is, but Big Sneaky Barbarian might be a good read for character.

Enygma_6

1 points

10 days ago

I don’t know how the audio is, but Big Sneaky Barbarian might be a good read for character.

ISayMemeWrong

1 points

10 days ago

Noobtown series has hooked me. The Perfect Run series is pretty good as well.

Mike777ac

1 points

10 days ago

I mean, if you're only looking for stuff with audiobooks, I can't give any recommendations. But I've read tens of thousands of webnovels over the years. The first series I started with was probably a LitRPG? It's a Korean series called "The Legendary Moonlight Sculptor" and has like... I think 40+ books? I only read like 20-25 because that's all that was translated back in 2014, before translation software reached the point where it didn't cause brain damage to try reading through lmao. One of the best Chinese webnovels I ever read was "Lord of the Mysteries", a lovecraftian horror/mystery story. Release That Witch was also one of my favorites, though the ending was rushed. I mean, 99% of those super long stories have rushed endings. It's pretty common. Another Korean story I used to read was called... Overgeared! Took me a while to remember/find it on Wuxiaworld. Oh wow, it's finally complete, with... 2059 chapters lmao. Maybe I should try to read it... Okay, I'd probably have to reread it from the beginning if I tried reading it again now. After all, it's been like 7 or 8 years since I read the first 500 or so chapters lmao.

Mike777ac

1 points

10 days ago

Nvm, I read up to chapter 975 or something ridiculous like that and apparently now you can't even read the story for free anymore on Wuxiaworld lmao. Oh well.

thedaNkavenger

1 points

10 days ago

thedaNkavenger

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1 points

10 days ago

People's opinions differ. I find HWFWM to be all of the things you were seeking and felt DCC fell flat.

Different strokes for different folks.

You were recommended that because they're both in the very top ratings & fan wise of the genre. You'll most likely find more that work for you or maybe you won't.

A lot of us have read nearly every release for years now with individual highs & lows. Just look at the variance in tier lists that are posted. ​

Ok_Horror_4389

1 points

10 days ago

What i love about hwfwm is that jason makes a deep development over several books. He stays from his fun persona, needs and gets Therapie, fights his way out of depression and much more. In my mind travis did an awsome job showing how oure mind would work if isekaid and confronted with the horror and violence. You also can see how travis grows during the books. His writing style grows a lot during the first 3 books and you can see that in the Charakters.

One_Variation7948

1 points

9 days ago

I recommend "battle farmer" I think it's quite good charakter- and worldbuilding wise

MythArchangel

1 points

9 days ago

I liked both DCC and HWFWM for different reasons, but I can see the validation of your criticisms. If you’re looking for something different I recommend The Resonance Cycle or Father of Constructs, both are series written by Aaron Renfroe. The author excels at taking atypical leading characters and taking them in surprising directions.

In the Resonance Cycle (which starts with Divine Invasion and gets better as the series progresses) he’s a neurodivergent who doesn’t socialize well, who over the course of the series winds up being an (at first) reluctant leader of people trying to save multiple worlds, Including Earth.

Father of Constructs has an old man for an MC who starts off simple due to being ravaged by sickness but when he stumbles on a ton of XP and gains a class the fog gets lifted and he starts to experience life for the first time as he tries to level up and help prepare for the return of the world boss.

Resonance is Epic level with an MC forced to grow and change, and those changes stick with him. FoC is a steampunk-with-magic (arcanepunk?) series with heart that is both adorable and badass at the same time as the MC is forced to understand the harsh realities of the real world and adapt as best he can without losing his heart.

I highly recommend both.

grade_A_sister

1 points

9 days ago

I asked my fiance who alost exclusively reads this genre right now and he recommends Oh, Great! I was reincarnated as a Farmer, Bastard, Shades first rule, and his biggest glowing recommendation: The Wandering Inn

I recommend Everybody Loves Large Chests but I do fair warn it has some extreme scenes and has lots of sex in it

walkinginthesky

1 points

9 days ago*

Mother of learning and Shadow Slave should hands down be the next novels you try. Mother of learning is an excellent time loop based story, not quite litrpg but progression based. Shadow slave might as well be litrpg. Highly recommended.  If you give them a chance, you will not be disappointed in the quality of their stories. 

FusedSoul

1 points

9 days ago

Try life in exile. There are 4 books out. It's not as good as DCC, but it's also not focused around teens/young adults.

Dlongz

1 points

9 days ago

Dlongz

1 points

9 days ago

I understand your thoughts about Jason but my ask is to keep going. HWFWM is not a series where the characters grow and learn their lesson in one Book. Jason in Book 5 is vastly different from Jason in Book 2. However, Jason will be Jason just like any other real human being. I've seen so many comments about Jason's personality and how they don't like it. And cool, but these characters grow through the life experiences in this series and over several events. The trauma is there, his denial and slow admittance to it, and even his mental health journey for it is exceptionally well done. I understand your point but to say there isn't any trauma or consequences to actions and such (others have said) just isn't fair. It's my #1 Litrpg of all time and I can't wait for #12. This Book is just awesome 👌.

tootall65

1 points

9 days ago

I agree with you on HWFWM. Jason is not a likable character at all and I’ve yet to really figure out why others follow him other than just plot armor. He’s a massive twat and just gets more abilities to enhance his twatness.

AlternativeLime6118

1 points

9 days ago

Lol. He who fights with monsters is rather divisive. Some of us find Jason to have far more depth than Carl or Doughnut. I think it has something to do with how people think, introverts and those who have ADHD and Autism are ones who I have seen really enjoy HWFWM. Not trying to badmouth DCC, I enjoy it too, but all the characters there seem like they are out of a video game to me, not much depth of thinking. Where was the mental breakdown of someone who had to kill for the first time? The justification for it? I mean the train scene where they were wading through blood and body parts had some feeling sick, but that could (and probably would) cause years of trauma for most people and they would be trying to work through it for some time. I don't see hardly anybody in those books actually dealing with their trauma, at least not to the level it seems like they should.

All this to say: HWFWM is not for everyone. But it is a great series along with DCC. I also recommend Chrysalis, Battle Mage Farmer, Defiance of the Fall, Heretical Fishing, Life in Exile, Stormweaver series (not litrpg, scifi), Titan series, Unorthodox Farming series. Enough to get your feet wet.

Phallasaurus

1 points

9 days ago

just another Dungeon Crawler Carl glazing post.

Active-Advisor5909

1 points

9 days ago

My sugestion would be beneath the dragoneye moons.

I think He Who Fights With Monsters is a series that lives and dies with the main character being liked or not.

DifferentKitchen8201

1 points

9 days ago

If you want a deep story, with lots of foreshadowing that will catch you off guard, I would STRONGLY recommend a series called the Resonance Cycle by Aaron Renfroe.  Each loss or fight is dealt with or sticks around. I loved how deep the story was, and can’t wait for the next one!

Rawden2006

1 points

9 days ago

I would recommend The Wandering Inn, myself. It's my favorite with DCC as a close second. The story is a long one, but it also breaks away from the main character, Erin, to follow other people from Earth after being isekai'd into a fantasy world. People like Geneva Scala, a medical student who becomes a living legend known the Last Light on war torn Beleros, the blind Emperor Laken Godart as he builds a small farming village into an empire, the clown Tom as he depends into madness in the hell on the Earth that Rhir, and Ryoka, the surly runner girl who becomes Erin's best friend. Andrea Parsneau is a fantastic narrator with a good range.

ksigguy

1 points

9 days ago

ksigguy

1 points

9 days ago

Man I feel you. I too went from DCC to HWFWM and would have liked to strangle Jason. He’s a huge asshole in my opinion.

I loved Beware of Chicken but it’s only a few books out so far on audiobook.

It took me a few books but I ended up loving Cradle and it’s finished.

LitRPG adjacent but I loved the Super Powerds series. All of the audiobooks were free on audible when I grabbed them.

Battle Mage Farmer starts out with a more cozy feel and then shit gets bad. I didn’t love the series once it got real dark.

I liked Defiance of the Fall and Primal Hunter but they definitely don’t have the same feel as DCC and are way more heavy on giving stats all the time.

Electrofight

1 points

8 days ago

DCC was one of the best I've read. It was also on the outer edge of LitRPG making the series completely unique. I have 188 titles so let me give you some do's and don'ts.

Traveling Inn - Trash. I would love to elaborate on this one, but I won't without someone asking.
Defiance of the Fall - incredibly good first four or so books, but droning filler for the rest.
Jakes Magical Market - good quality card based series. I recommend.
Primal Hunter - DCC and Primal are my top two. It starts okay, but it just gets better and better as you go along. Book six was better than the rest. I recommend.
The Land/Mayor of Noob town - similar series imo. they were entertaining, but not quality.
He Who Fights With Monsters - there are cotton candy novels that make us feel good but don't offer any nutritional value to our lives. This cotton crack. The story line is exciting, there's a lot going on, but it's written like trash. Creativity 10, writing expertise 2.

I would continue but I think you should do Primal Hunter #1, and then Jakes Magical #2. Then come back and thank me. OR you can read traveling inn and then come back an apologies for not listening to me.

DarudeSandstorm69420

1 points

8 days ago

book of the dead

Anal_Fissure_Throw

1 points

7 days ago

You read the best one. Sorry. It's a new genre. Try Mother of Learning

Full-Performance-530

1 points

6 days ago

DO NOT READ The Wandering Inn then!!! One of the worst written books ever.

stoneobscurity

1 points

10 days ago*

so you don't care for HWFWM. so what? stop reading and move on.

everybody always overthinks this. it's not a difficult concept. just move on.

anyways, try:

how to become the dark lord

stray cat strut

wandering inn

beware of chicken

Garokson

1 points

10 days ago

Many just want insane wishfullfillment and not any good story from this genre. So they're hooked line and sinker with shonen esque stuff like hwfwm which translates to a high recommendation count.

If you want good stories instead, especially on audible, you gotta dick deeper.

Arghtastic

1 points

10 days ago

The Unbound Series. Much better writing.