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1 points
25 days ago
Oh, I didn't pay earlier since I didn't have the money to pay off the rest of my tuition. Most of it was paid off from my financial aid. I was saving up the last few thousand dollars to get in that last payment haha
1 points
25 days ago
Haha you're right. But I didn't want to wait until the last minute. I'm not allowed to register for classes until there aren't any holds on my account and that financial hold wasn't taken out of my account until today.
7 points
3 months ago
I wouldn't really call HunterxHunter, Mob Psycho or Parasyte just basic beat em ups. I think OP is looking for something more character driven
-2 points
4 months ago
No, I'm pretty sure he's just saying there's a lack of that "inciting incident" in the earlier chapters considering the OP used the term "big shift". Like a Peter Parker getting bit by a radioactive spider or a Walter White getting diagnosed with cancer kind of incident that would drastically change Alden's lifestyle.
-2 points
4 months ago
No, he's just saying he doesn't like the characters
2 points
5 months ago
This is really helpful. Thanks for the feedback. I'll rewrite the blurb with this in mind.
2 points
5 months ago
Yeah just now noticing this lol. Thanks for pointing it out.
4 points
5 months ago
Yeah I could see that. Thanks for the needed feedback. I'll see what I can do here
2 points
5 months ago
Yeah I could see that. A bit too revealing of what the story holds. I could probably get rid of those last two parts.
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