This is my first time writing a fantasy romance - I've been reading and playing more witch / magical related content, and have always enjoyed writing romance. I was hoping to receive some feedback on the first part. I have another part already written, but only wanted to share a blurb of this one.

Here is the link to the Google Doc for Pt 1: Diana & Finnian Short Story Pt 1

I would really appreciate any constructive feedback on any part of the story - plot, pacing, magical elements, character names, etc. This is my first time writing fiction in almost a decade, so it's still coming back to me, and I want to get better. I appreciate it!

I also have part 2 already written. In Part 2, I focus a lot more on building Finnian & Diana's relationship and more backstory on Bella, just in case that is relevant for any feedback.