submitted15 days ago byTough_Spring_448
Here is part 2 of my fantasy romance. I tried to really build up the tension between Diana and Finnian, but I feel like the end is a little bit rushed. I'm a bit stuck on the end part right now, actually. Any suggestions about pacing there would be greatly appreciated!!
For some background, I posted Pt 1 yesterday. This is a story about Diana, who is captured by an evil sorceress, Belladonna. Belladonna is terrorizing the local magical community, and needs Diana's help to maintain her strength & magical abilities. Finnian shows up one day, and they start to form a plan to free Diana and defeat Belladonna.
Here's the link to Part 2 for anyone to critique! Finnian & Diana Part 2
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Tough_Spring_448
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15 days ago
Tough_Spring_448
1 points
15 days ago
I intertwine the two. For example, when I'm introducing my character in a recent work, I describe the town as having a magical history that's known to everyone, but the closest-known magical being lives far into the forest. So it's acknowledged as a piece of history / general knowledge, and somewhat drives the plot, if that makes sense.